Overall, research was well done. Topics and connections made to the literature were interesting. Third drafts were generally much better. With the next essay do not wait until the third draft to complete your research or develop your ideas. Your second draft should be a good indication of where your final is headed.
Do not overuse rhetorical questions. Make your argument clear for reader with statements of position and support.
Avoid beginning sentences with "I believe" or "I think." We are trying to write more formal, less personalized essays so try to write in third person. Also avoid using second person "you."
Some basic elements of grammar need to be addressed. Capitalization, spelling, usage, and sentence formation are particular problems. Use the handbook to check items before you submit drafts.
Better proofreading needs to happen! Read your essay aloud to catch simple mistakes before you turn in a final copy. This should be standard practice.
Do not forget your Writers Memo (see earlier blog for comprehensive list of prompts to consider). Check your syllabus to see how this are being graded this semester.
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